A Short Winter’s Tale
I cry red berries
wash them with teardrops
So you can eat them in the morning
with your breakfast
as you listen so intently
to the news on the TV
I want lifetimes
with you…
Without you
I would be
shivering in the snow
tearless
berryless
bereft.
Very creative. 🙂
January 25, 2024 at 7:44 PM
Thank you, Nancy. 🙏🏽
January 25, 2024 at 8:11 PM
I feel this. Hugs!
January 25, 2024 at 7:54 PM
Thank you so much, Ka! Big hug🙏🏽
January 25, 2024 at 7:55 PM
Beautiful xx
January 25, 2024 at 8:22 PM
Thank you so much, Jay! Means a lot coming from you. 🙏🏽
January 25, 2024 at 8:44 PM
Wonderful, Ellen! ❤️❤️❤️
January 25, 2024 at 9:42 PM
Thank you so much, “At Sunnyside”. I sent my friend a link to your blog. She loves your art videos.🙏🏽❤️😍
January 25, 2024 at 9:53 PM
Beautiful crystal berries!
To eat them right from the bush you have to be aware of your teeth. Lol…
January 26, 2024 at 7:39 AM
😊
January 26, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Looking at this image, I can almost feel the icy cold wet drops slipping on my fingertips. Your verse reflects the teardrop appearance perfectly, but before I read it, just looking at the picture alone- my first impression was that each berry seems to be dressed its very own elegant sparkling gown 🙂
January 26, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Very imaginative!
January 26, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Beautiful image and words alike.
January 26, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Thank you so much!🙏🏽
January 26, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Words from the soul. Wonderful.
January 27, 2024 at 3:49 PM
Thank you, Ronnie! A lovely comment!! Many thanks!🙏🏽
January 27, 2024 at 8:11 PM
I love this! It’s so visual, so beautifully picturesque. The picture genuinely appears to show that the berries are weeping.
January 27, 2024 at 4:43 PM
Thank you, Dayle!
January 27, 2024 at 8:12 PM
So beautiful 🆗
February 3, 2024 at 10:42 AM
Bahut, bahut dhanayawaad!! 🙏🏽 Thank you for stopping by.
February 3, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Very Beautiful
February 4, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Bahut, bahut dhanayawaad!🙏🏽
February 4, 2024 at 10:38 AM
These lines (although we don’t have snow 😁)
“Without you
I would be
shivering in the snow
tearless
berryless
bereft.”
I’m going to interpret it as a mother to her child. She’s in the dorm now as classes started this Monday. She’ll be home during the weekends but you know, I’m all alone in our bed on weekdays and miss her so much. Love this, Ellen! 💕
February 6, 2024 at 3:00 PM
Thank you so much, Adelheid. Missing someone is so hard. Glad you liked this enough to use it. ❤️🙏🏽
February 7, 2024 at 11:12 AM
You are much welcome, my dear.
February 13, 2024 at 10:18 AM
❤️🙏🏽
February 13, 2024 at 10:20 AM
What heartfelt beauty and sadness!
February 8, 2024 at 10:04 PM
Thank you, Ubit! 🙏🏽
February 9, 2024 at 9:53 AM
🧡🧡🧡
February 9, 2024 at 9:57 AM
❤️😊🙏🏽
February 9, 2024 at 10:01 AM
UN PENSIERO
February 10, 2024 at 6:17 AM
BUONA DOMENICA
February 18, 2024 at 3:25 AM
Buena Domenica a tu tambien!
February 18, 2024 at 9:46 AM