Abandonata
Abandoned by life
choked by overgrowth of unkempt green
once upon a time
breathing, seething with energy
steaming with the hot breath of cattle
teaming with the tenuous tenure of life
*
Your body long gone
your loving heart now ashes
your caring now a memory
which nothing can erase
and time cannot erode.
*
How I long for thee
though a mere thin veil
separates your spirit from me
small comfort
when I miss thee mightily.
This entry was posted on August 3, 2013 by stockdalewolfe. It was filed under Animal & Landscape Photographs, Loss, Poetry and was tagged with Abandonment, Barns, Death, Farm animals, Grief, loss.
Ellen, that’s again a beautiful photo and poem! Right on! Regards Mitza
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August 3, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Thank you so much, Mitza. Very glad it spoke to you! 🙂 ellen
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August 3, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Beautiful post! I want to linger here, Ellen.
Blessings ~ Wendy
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August 3, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Thank you so very much for your lovely comment, Wendy. Blessings to you as well, Ellen
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August 3, 2013 at 4:44 PM
Wow, what a beautiful poem, Ellen–I got so caught up in it that I could smell the smells. The last stanza echoes in my heart, especially.
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August 3, 2013 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, Bennetta!! Means a lot at this time. You are always so responsive. God bless YOU big as you always say.
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August 3, 2013 at 4:43 PM
You know I wonder about that some times–why I bother being so responsive; doesn’t seem to be the norm. So–are you havin’ a rough summer? No need for details, I’ll just be lifting you up in BIG prayers–bless you with same.
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August 3, 2013 at 7:10 PM
So in answer to your question about this summer– been tough. My husband having problems with his job and I hope not serious problems with his health. And other stuff.
How is the summer treating YOU??? I am sorry if I have not been as responsive. Will try harder. Have added you to my prayer list.
Thank you for your responsiveness and blessings.
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August 4, 2013 at 9:28 AM
Please know that my words were not meant to complain, or solicit responses–I guess I’m just weird, that I tend to be more interactive than many bloggers I’ve “met”. And it does cost me sometimes. I’m keeping you and your husband close in my heart and prayers, and I thank you for your prayers–summer has been too loud and full of turmoiled unrest here. Seasons–they come and go, don’t they. Bless you.
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August 4, 2013 at 1:25 PM
You’re not “weird”– just more giving. I try but find it hard to address all I read on WP. It eats up lots of time as I am following a lot of people–so many I have not even updated the list on my blog. Sometimes I think I have over-reached.
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August 4, 2013 at 5:11 PM
It’s true that blogging can become a full-time job, and devour your day fast; easy to over-reach. People do drop off after awhile–most people don’t blog daily, particularly if they have “real” lives to attend to.
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August 4, 2013 at 6:56 PM
magnificent lament
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August 3, 2013 at 7:36 PM
Second try at sending this comment. You are one of the top responsive writers and poets. I am sorry if I haven’t been to you– will try harder to keep up. Didn’t even blog for a long time. A tough summer. Just hoping my husband will be okay. Hopefully nothing serious. Lots of stuff going on. How is YOUR summer going? I am going to add YOU to my prayer list right now. Thanks for all, especially the blessings! You have a grand heart.
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August 3, 2013 at 9:22 PM
please don’t apologize for life – your husband and you have my prayers, as well Ellen
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August 4, 2013 at 5:46 AM
Thank you so much, Paul. You are a treasure!
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August 4, 2013 at 8:48 AM
I can feel the emotions that run deep in this poem, Ellen. Beautiful piece. Blessings, Dee
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August 5, 2013 at 9:38 PM
Thanks so much, Dee. Blessings to you, too!
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August 6, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Loss is devastating. Touching poem and photo, Ellen.
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August 12, 2013 at 3:52 PM
Thank you so much, Genie. Devastating, yes, but better than not having loved at all.
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August 13, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Absolutely! Good point.
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August 13, 2013 at 3:05 PM